She said “Don’t rhyme your poems!”
“Well why forever not?”
I answered flabbergasted
For clearly she’d forgot
The fun and the frivolity
Of mashing up wordplay
To bring about phrases that click
And tick along per se
That bounce along on the paper
And trip right off the tongue
That put a smile on faces of
The old and of the young
A means to convey messages
In flights of fantasy
That teeter on the precipice
So sentimentally
And hop and skip cross neurons
That surge throughout the brain
Much like a trigger pulled to fire
In poetic refrain
Whilst forging easy access
Succinct to memorise
To jolt the hearts and minds of all
In a cunning disguise
Whilst delighting Mr Wernicke
And thrilling Broca too
For rhyme is classless; doesn’t judge
The reader; it is true
And all it asks in sweet return
Is that you dig the beat
Get down with it all chilled; relaxed
Whilst putting up your feet
Without pretence or masquerade
That it is anything more
Than simple undiluted words
That many do adore!
Comments on: "Don’t Rhyme Your Poems!" (14)
Should I rhyme my answers
Like this and that and such
I’ll wait for your next answer
Before I do too much
I think that might be neat don’t you?
I think that might be cool
So hit the beat and stay in touch
For that’s the golden rule
I will my friend, I’ll do my best
For trying is my thing
But if I lose sight of your posts
Instead your phone I’ll ring
Oh boy your quick and nifty
With such a great reply
Please do as you have bid my friend
So I don’t have to cry π
I wrote this all last evening
And predicted what you’d say
It really is such sweet relief
Conversation went this way
Well now that is amusing
So funny he he he
And though this is predictable
You’re really quite witty! π
I think that all this caffeine
Is going to my head
I should have had it early
But got up late instead
Caffeine? You mean you’ve made yourself
A cuppa! Where is mine?
For I would like a cup of tea.
Yes! That will do me fine!
I’m really very sorry
Admit I didn’t think
As penance for my mistake
I’ll pour mine down the sink
No! Don’t do that you silly
It’s really no big deal
Instead I will alight from bed
And make my own morn-meal
I’m staggered by your lumber
And thought you up for hours
I’ll wish you a good morning
As we get on with ours
ππ
Yes. I can only agree with you
Rhyming poems are pod for both the reader and the writer who…
Wrote the writ!
G:)
Enjoyed your words once more π
Thanks again π
‘Pod’ is nonsense for ‘fun’ it’s ‘twirly’ on a Sunday Morning (song sung courtesy of Lionel Rich-Tea)
G:)